I like the storyline you can imgain how it will turn out, however sound could have been used to create more of a mood.
I think the storyline looks very good. I like how you have added extra information on the shots for example "*yawns*" giving the audience more information about whats happening :)
I like the storyline you can imgain how it will turn out, however sound could have been used to create more of a mood.
ReplyDeleteI think the storyline looks very good. I like how you have added extra information on the shots for example "*yawns*" giving the audience more information about whats happening :)
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