I like the name of the title as its short and tell us a lot about the film itself. Form the narrative there were quite a lot of stuff I got confused about such as who is she aspiring to be like, why does she hate her mother and also it lacks detail on what happens in the flash forward and what her daily routines are.
I think your storyline is good, showing the themes of British Social Realism. I also like the fact that you are creative in the sense that you want to film an establishing shot of London from a helicopeter but you cant because of the cost, showing that you took into account the briefs requirement of being a Film 4 film, therfore having a samll budget. I like how you introduce your title to the audience in your opening sequence. :)
I like the name of the title as its short and tell us a lot about the film itself. Form the narrative there were quite a lot of stuff I got confused about such as who is she aspiring to be like, why does she hate her mother and also it lacks detail on what happens in the flash forward and what her daily routines are.
ReplyDeleteI think your storyline is good, showing the themes of British Social Realism. I also like the fact that you are creative in the sense that you want to film an establishing shot of London from a helicopeter but you cant because of the cost, showing that you took into account the briefs requirement of being a Film 4 film, therfore having a samll budget. I like how you introduce your title to the audience in your opening sequence. :)
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